Shop More Submit  Join Login
×

:iconantonfrost: More from antonfrost





Details

Submitted on
April 9, 2011
File Size
135 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
128
Favourites
17 (who?)
Comments
10
×
sun going down,
he finally jumped.
six word story

bungee or suicide or bird
Add a Comment:
 
:iconmynaophelia:
MynaOphelia Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
I like bird best ^.^
Reply
:iconantonfrost:
antonfrost Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011   Writer
Me too. The image is so vivid in my mind, I love it! :heart:
Reply
:iconzebrazebrazebra:
zebrazebrazebra Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Professional Writer
My instinct was to rephrase this as 'he went down with the sun', but while that might come across as more sinister it doesn't actually say as much. I dig your version. And yes, the title makes it happen.
Reply
:iconantonfrost:
antonfrost Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011   Writer
:)
Reply
:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I like how this is pretty open to interpretation. The phrasing is great and I think the diction is quite simple, which could suggest that jumping in itself is relatively simple, although it's not for the process before that, if you get what I mean?

I like the structure and how that could reflect the difference being staying up and then jumping.. or falling, rather.
Reply
:iconantonfrost:
antonfrost Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011   Writer
i get what you mean.

i've been thinking about simplicity lately...it seems that many problems and questions are essentially simple, but the solutions and answers (or the attempt at them, anyway) are what cause complication. haha i think i'm just saying that a question is no longer complicated when you stop looking for an answer. how zen.
Reply
:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I suppose they are. :nod:

Depends on how you see it, I think. :P

It's interesting for sure. :)
Reply
:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
Well done!

(You might wonder if the title doesn't add anther four words. Is there any rule about that, Anton?)
Reply
:iconantonfrost:
antonfrost Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011   Writer
oh i don't play by the rules, my man. ;)
Reply
:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
Good for you!
Reply
Add a Comment: