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what does it say,
she asked,
& held her palm out.
i spread her fingers apart.
your life will open & remain open,
i told her.
what does that mean?
she asked.
i slid my finger
down her thumb
& palm
to wrist
where i held it
over her pulse
& said
all
y-
our
m-
any
p-
et-
al-
s
w-
ill
f-
all
as
you
beg-
in
to
lo-
ve.
she asked,
& held her palm out.
i spread her fingers apart.
your life will open & remain open,
i told her.
what does that mean?
she asked.
i slid my finger
down her thumb
& palm
to wrist
where i held it
over her pulse
& said
all
y-
our
m-
any
p-
et-
al-
s
w-
ill
f-
all
as
you
beg-
in
to
lo-
ve.
what is said and what we say.
© 2012 - 2024 Anthony-Ryan
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this probably wasn't intentional, but somehow i caught that "begin to love" could also say "beg into love". kind of an interesting twist no? anyway, i love that line, it's so very sweet and poetic